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4/5/2016 05:16:28 pm
I viewed Manhattan & Grace's project. I liked how they chose to do a story, which was creative and something that I didn't think of. I felt like it could have been shorter but it was still enjoyable nonetheless. I also viewed Luke, Thomas, Michael, and Andrew's project. I liked their ideas behind it, though it could have been longer. The same could be said about ours, though.
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Andrew Bowers
4/5/2016 05:52:09 pm
I viewed Carson's and Jadon's project. I liked how they did a creative story. However I wish the pictures in the book were clearer but, I still enjoyed it very much. In addition, I also viewed Ben and Keion's project. I liked how they used pictures to write the formula out. However I wish that they could have made the pictures more clear but, I still liked their project very much.
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Sophie Strawbridge
4/5/2016 07:08:11 pm
The first project I viewed was Emma's. I thought it was a clever way to remember the formula, which I enjoyed. However, I thought the wording could have been phrased better to give the reader a clearer idea of the concepts being conveyed. I will admit my group's project did not focus so much on remembering the formula, as we did to explain it. Nonetheless, I liked the different approach and original artwork.
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Emma Allen
4/5/2016 08:12:54 pm
The project's I viewed were Ben and Keion's, and Grace's and Manhattan's. Ben and Keion were both very creative by using pictures to make up the quadratic formula. They could have made it more clear though (like a translation of the quadratic formula), but it was still good. Something they had in their project that I did not do was put pictures from the computer on the slide, and those turned out well. The pictures are easier to understand than my drawings. Grace and Manhattan also did a great job. They were very creative with the story. Although, it could have been shorter. Even so, it was really good. What they did that I did not think of was to write a small book for the quadratic formula.
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Lauren Loss
4/5/2016 08:59:58 pm
I viewed Keion and Ben's project which I though was very clever I liked how the pictured worked well together, although a little translation would be nice at the bottom (even though you could figure it out in the end). Over all, I thought it was really creative and I would have never thought of it that way. My group kinda did the wrong idea than everyone else's. I also viewed Carson and Jadon's, I thought that their project was really cool and how they told it in a story book was neat! Although the pictures could have been clearer, which my group didn't do as well, it was really cool! By they way grade A acting skills.
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Lauren Loss
4/5/2016 09:01:21 pm
Didn't realize how many typing errors I had in this comment! I was on my phone, yikes.
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Manhattan Ethington
4/6/2016 07:05:06 am
I watched Sophie, Cecile, and Lauren's video. I liked how this group incorporated cooking into their video. My one piece of advice is maybe to have spoken clearer. You thought about using the cookies to show the formula, which I did not think of. I also watched Lindsey, Alyssa, Iman, and Jayceana's project. I liked how they wrote the song. My one piece of advice is maybe making it a bit longer. You thought about filming in the school, which I did not think of.
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Grace Fisher
4/6/2016 07:07:49 am
I viewed Lindsey, Iman, Alyssa, and JayC video. One thing I liked about the project was the rap. I like the way it helps you remember the formula. One piece of advice I have is to make part of it match up to the song more, it was just a little off. I did not think of using teachers as references. I also viewed Emily, Sarah, Mackenzie, and Lydia's video. I liked the song and how it had all the necessary parts to it. One piece of advice I have is that it was perfect and never change a thing you did! I did not think of using things that you are good at or comedy in my project.
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Cecile S.
4/6/2016 07:08:24 am
I watched Lindsey, Alyssa, Jay'ceana, and Iman's project. I liked the catchy song, it really was great that you put it to the tune of such an upbeat song! I think that maybe if you repeated the equation part one more time in the video it would have been great, just as a reminder for the audience. I did not think of "plugging it back in" like you did with the charger, so that was cool! I also looked at Keion and Ben's, and thought the idea was very creative! I understood what they meant, but I believe that the all over 2A part was kind of confusing, but I'm not into baseball so maybe that's why I did not get it. I did not think of doing a picture, so great job!
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Charlie Delmonico
4/6/2016 12:39:40 pm
I liked Emma's project and Carson and Jadon's project. I really like how Emma's story was drawn and it was about animals. I like Carson and Jadon's project because the story was really cute, and it was read like a child's book.
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y=mxBone (Alex Livingston)
4/7/2016 07:15:04 am
I viewed Zoey/Alana's time lapse video. It was very fun to watch and in the end it showed a very nice piece of art. However, I think they could have maybe explained in some way that they understood the formula because drawing the formula may not properly show their comprehension of it. Good choice of music though :) I also viewed Carson/Jadon/Collin's video. This video was very long and had some very funny parts. The only thing I could say bad was maybe add some excitement to spice things up a little. Other then that it was very nice and no complaints whatsoever.
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Travis Turner
4/7/2016 07:16:16 am
I watched Zoe and Alana's project and I like how they took their time on doing their project. I though it was cool because it was different than what you would expect to see. I don't see anything that you could have done differently because it fine as it is!
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Alana Medlin
4/7/2016 06:26:35 pm
I watched Lauren's, Sophie's, and Cecile's project. I love how they included them working out each step to show how it comes to be. Whenever I do these sorts of comments, I always try to answer as honestly as possible. For their project, I can't think of any advise to give! I did not think of making it kind of like a cooking show, that was a great idea on their part!
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Madie Barnes
4/8/2016 11:47:16 am
I viewed manhattan and graces story. It was very creative and unique. I would only advise them that the structure of dialogue could have been better. A few times while reading the story, I could´t tell who was speaking, otherwise it was amazing. I also read emma's story. It was very creative as well. Everything about emma´s story was good and I liked how it was told through slides and pictures. I also viewed peggy´s presentation. It was very creative and I liked how she presented it. Everyone did an amazing job on this project and I had a lot of fun working on my own project.
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Lydia Ludwig
4/11/2016 04:10:20 am
I watched Lauren, Sophie, and Cecile's project. I thought they did a really good job of including all of the steps to make the quadratic formula. (What you guys made looked good too). I would't change a thing!
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Alyssa Gable
4/11/2016 09:42:40 am
I watched Lydia, Emily, Mackenzie, and Sarah's video. I really liked it. It was upbeat and funny. They gave all the information they were supposed to and added some extra facts. I wouldn't change anything.
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Jadon Thompson
4/11/2016 09:43:39 am
I watched John´s video. It was kind of funny and a bit confusing because of miss neilsons video. Overall I liked it.
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Collin Diesch
4/11/2016 09:44:05 am
I watched Thomas's groups project. Loved the bloopers.
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Ben Brady
4/11/2016 09:46:12 am
I viewed Carson, Collin, and Jadon's video. I liked how they made a story to explain the formula. It would've been better if the pictures were easier to see. I also saw Thomas, Michael, and Luke's project. I liked how they told a story while pointing out he different parts of the formula.
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Lindsey Hubay
4/11/2016 09:46:25 am
I viewed Carson, Jadon, and Collin's video. I like the creativity with the book and Carson's humor. I don't really have any advice, I thought they executed the video perfectly. Their group thought about how to solve the formula. I also viewed John's video. I like how in-depth John went. One piece of advice I would recommend would be to speed up the video. One thing John thought about was explaining how to fully solve the formula.
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Jadon Thompson
4/11/2016 09:47:46 am
I watched Emily, Mackenzie, Sarah, and Lydia´s video. It was so funny and made me laugh. I liked when kenzie played the saxaphone.
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Bryce Erskine
4/11/2016 10:24:56 am
I watched Carson's, John's, Emily's and Alyssa's video. I liked their videos because it was very amusing to watch, it made me laugh and it also helped me to learn the quadratic formula better. Some advice to the projects are to be louder in the videos (they were very quiet) and to also apply different aspects in to their videos.
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4/11/2016 11:14:34 am
I watched Alex/Derrick/Travis' Video, Alana/Zoe's Video, Sophi/Cecile's video. I liked that all of the projects were very creative in their own way, no video was similar. I advise that all groups should spend their time on the quality of the project, all of these people seemed to spend time on there projects, so no issue there. I thought that the videos were entertaining and educational at the same time.
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Derick
4/11/2016 11:46:31 am
I watched zoey/alana's video and lydia/mackenzie/sarah/and emily's Zoe and alana's seemed like it took some editing skills and they probably spent a long time trying to create their final piece, but it doesnt help the viewer knoe anything about math. the other group I watched did well and helped me remember it but it was kind of short
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Andre Bowers
4/11/2016 11:48:27 am
I watched Luke Scharf's groups project they explained the formula well and you could understand it, but I wish it had more excitement or something. I also watched Mackenzie Wachob's group and thought the project they did was great! Overall good job guys!
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Carson Webster
4/11/2016 12:22:58 pm
I watched John's video and I thought it was great with miss neilson's video at the end! I also watch Thomas' video and the bloopers were hilarious!
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Iman Mahmoud
4/11/2016 05:31:15 pm
I watched Sarah, Lydia, Emily, and Mackenzie's video. One thing I liked about it was it catchy and rhymed. A piece of advice is to talk about the equation more. I also watched Carson, Jadon, and Collin's video. One thing I like about, it was hilarious. A piece of advice is to show the pictures in the story.
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Sarah Sahmarani
4/11/2016 08:39:48 pm
The projects that I viewed were Collin, Jadon, and Carson's video and John and Charlie's video. I thought Collin's group had a funny video, it helped you memorize the formula in an easy way. One piece of advice I have about it is to speak a little louder. I didn't think about making a story. In charlie and John's video, I thought it was well said and explained. I didn't think of including a professional video like Miss. Neilson's. One piece of advice is nothing really, maybe include Charlie in the video. Great job everyone! :)
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Thomas Huffman
4/12/2016 05:41:06 am
I watched John's video and I like how he explained every step, and how he added Miss. Nelson's video at the end.
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Mackenzie Wachob
4/12/2016 11:09:12 am
I watched Carson's video and I thought that they did very good. A piece of advice that I would give is that everyone else in the group should have been shown in the video more. I also watched alan's and zoe's video and I thought it was very cool.
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Emily
4/12/2016 11:28:28 am
The videos that I watched were Alana, Zoes and Emmas. I like them both very much. I think they were both very creative and artistic!
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